The Stones in the Desert, Part One
The Stones in the Desert, Part Two
The Stones in the Desert, Part Three
Take a look at them, and then if you're interested, suggest what should happen next! Possibilities include...
- Soloman awakens lashed to his saddle and being led through the desert as Edrahed's prisoner. Why? What's the point of deception?
- Edrahed intends to feed Soloman to ... something, under the stones. What is it, and why? Soloman is a noted vampire hunter, perhaps Edrahed is a thrall to some vampire lord who wants revenge?
- Is Edrahed after Soloman specifically, or just whoever shows up? Is his father complicit in the deception, or has he been just as duped as Soloman?
- Are there other mammoth scorpions out there?
This is all just a draft anyway, so things can be changed retroactively or generally mucked around with as needed. Whattya think?
Legal Note for CYA: Soloman, this story, the setting, etc., are all ©2003 by me, all rights reserved. Not that I expect anyone who'd be reading this right now to want to steal this stuff, but I hope someday to be a bit more popular and it wouldn't do to unwittingly put my work into public domain or anything dumb like that.