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Helpful Feedback is Helpful

On the value of good manners, the agent who passed on Sky Pirates of Calypsitania last week wrote back in response to my thank you note to say, “I think your writing is very strong and I wish you the best in your agent hunt! For me, I just didn’t fall in love with the characters in the way that I’d need in order to be a great advocate.”


This, while it may not sound like much, is actually hugely helpful feedback. When you send out query after query and get the same boilerplate “not a good fit at this time” response, you begin to question every little aspect of what you’re doing. “Is my query letter too amateurish?” “Am I committing enormous grammatical blunders that I just don’t see?” “Is my adventure story about airship pirates really just a string of vapid clichés?” “Are the weird relationships and social outliers in this story too off-putting?” “Am I a hamfisted hack and everyone’s just been too nice to say so?”


This tiny bit of specific feedback makes all that junk go away. Being told by an industry professional that my writing is very strong is a bonus, I won’t lie! But the real value here is knowing that it was a matter of personal taste, rather than a systemic problem with the work. There are plenty of books out there that are great books, but I just don’t get into them. The entire corpus of Ernest Hemingway, just for starters.


What that means, in real terms, is that I have to just keep putting the book in front of agents until I find one for whom the book clicks. Of course, that was my plan anyway, but I feel a lot more secure about it now. Even if this particular agent and I end up never crossing paths again (although there’s no reason we might not), she’s done me a great favor and I’m grateful for it.


-The Gneech


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keross
Aug. 22nd, 2016 05:13 pm (UTC)
So far I've only gotten two rejections (okay, I only sent it to those two publishers) but I get what you're saying. "Sorry, doesn't fit out needs" and/or "don't think it would make money" (I kid you not) just don't tell you, as a writer, very much.

Glad you got some solid feed-back. :-)
xoagray
Aug. 25th, 2016 02:03 am (UTC)
This is what more agents need to do. Sometimes it's hard not to get a little anxiety over your work when people just keep saying no without giving a reason. Good on her for being constructive in her responces.
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